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How many "auctioners" are actually able to win? I've tried all the favorable acts for Alesia & nothing's let her win. Is there a way to edit the code values or just skip to the scene?

How fleshed out are the four different bid routes?

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how complete is the game?

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It'll never be complete without you.

If you choose to speak with Alesia here, when she walks away, there are no further options. 

Is this a bug or is it an unfinished path?

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That last choice ("You feel drawn...") shouldn't be available until you've exhausted all other options. So you must have triggered one of the other events twice, maybe by using the "back" arrow to reverse choices?

Perhaps I'll need to figure out a more durable way to code that section to prevent this.

EDIT: As of Chapter 3.31, this should be fixed.

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There is a typo here  on the page where you make your name

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"Greak"

Truly not a typo, but a NEW word, crafted by yours truly.

The child of 'great' and 'Greek'. One can easily deduce the meaning from here.

(Alright, thanks man. I'll probably fix it. 😄)

I have some problem with BGM, a song it alway mix with main theme that like a loop. Is it normal or bug? I play on Mac os.

This and a bunch of other bugs have been fixed in the latest update. Enjoy! Or y'know... suffer. Forever.

LoL Me, as a cowboy raedy to rodeo.

Hopefully we get more updates for the Academy route in the next few updates cause I feel like they ain't getting enough love compared to the gladiator.

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This is great can't wait for more only problem is I can't see how to save on mobile (browser)

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Honestly, it's rare that one of these text-based stories REALLY grips me, and keeps me invested in what's happening, but this is so well-written, so intriguing! I honestly wonder what the story might be like if I use a different stat set up - how people will react to the character, how the fight scene might go differently. I love the work so far, and I wish I had the money to subscribe to the patreon.

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Genuinely fantastic setting, the epitome of came for the lewd stayed for the story. I will be supporting through patreon

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It's February 2nd with no update yet

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I was abducted by a succubus and couldn't work on Orphan for a while. True story. I hope everyone can forgive me.

The newest update is inspired by this harrowing event.

You'll get your update when I'm finished playing with him.

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RIP in peace

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Are you okay? Did she kill you?

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lmao

I can't join the discord

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really good so far! I only wish my character's appearance was either kept vague or if I had the option to choose what he looked like, I got to the part where it describes my eyes as blue and that took me out of the emersion 

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Loved it 👍

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El archivo html: preciona la opcion abrir con, y luego selecciona chrome o google

How do I install the game for Android

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This is the best CYOA game I've ever played the characters are complicated and the right answer isn't always obvious. On my first playthrough I beat the troll and it was an awesomely written battle I felt the dread when it was first revealed and the tentative excitement as it continued and the undeniable joy after my triumph.

what happen to nsfw pack

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I have enjoyed this game so far, and will be waiting for new updates to come. The plot seems promising, and thanks for giving us a chance to teach that highborn a lesson :)

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Ancient rome- no gay content?

How can this be?

This game is interesting, but on mobile I can't press save to save the 5th slot.

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Great stuff. Excited to see more of the setting, it seems like a fascinating world so far.

Interested to see how stat checks will be implemented as well; my default character(mght/mind) got his teeth kicked in at the academy and i didnt find a way to even the confrontation until i switched to a mobility build.

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as of writing this the player character is Male only

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Very cool so far, I'm interested to see where it goes from here! 

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Typically, in situations like this, I'd say 'Orphan' is too early in development and doesn't yet have enough content to fairly judge where(and in what state) the game will be once completed. BUT... What is available presents a tone of fantasy so raw, visceral(, and quite horny) that I've seldom seen elsewhere. And even within that rarity, it manages to communicate those feelings smoother and with a focused quality that rivals some of the best I know. If you love the grim darkness of settings like Warhammer I'd wager you'll love 'Orphan'. So while I unfortunately must temper expectations with the reminder of just how young it's development is thus far, I'll be sure to follow it's progress with high hopes and I hope others do as well.

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Начало довольно интригующе, читается достаточно легко и понятно, несмотря на мой плохой английский 😅

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Very interesting concept and writing looks well!